We are 8th graders. We love social studies and are going to use our knowledge of the past to rock this world for the better. We love to learn, laugh, talk, blog, glog, create and share.
God job Meg! I liked how unlike a lot other people, you did't take a perspective of a tree, but of a person who wasn't willing to help. You used some sensory vocabulary which made it feel more real to read.
You did a great job! i especally like the idea of incorperating the New York Times newspapper heading into the glog, that was a neet idea. Once again great job.
Great Job Meaghan! I liked how you talked about how he had a family too. It made it more real and sad to think that he could have been saved. Good job!
God job Meg! I liked how unlike a lot other people, you did't take a perspective of a tree, but of a person who wasn't willing to help. You used some sensory vocabulary which made it feel more real to read.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job! i especally like the idea of incorperating the New York Times newspapper heading into the glog, that was a neet idea. Once again great job.
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ReplyDeleteI like your poem Meaghan. The vocabulary pulls the reader in. I saw a few typing errors but the poem sounds good.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Meaghan. I particularly liked the repetition of the line "you could have helped me." Powerful use of repetition...
ReplyDeleteTip: I'd love to see you edit your poem a little better...
I love the way you read this, it was so powerful. Nice job!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem and how you didn't do it in the trees perspective. There were a few typos but otherwise it was good.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Meaghan! I liked how you talked about how he had a family too. It made it more real and sad to think that he could have been saved. Good job!
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