Saturday, March 31, 2012

Lynching Mini Project- Max Smith-Ducati

4 comments:

  1. Awesome job Max. The repetition throughout the poem of "I wonder why" really gave it a feeling of depth and made the reader think of what the lynchers reasoning was behind their acts. The way you described the scene as well really painted a picture to go along. Nice job bro!

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  2. Great job Max. I also like how you used repetition in your poem. It really emphasized the point of the man wondering "why" and I also liked how you incorporated a question into your poem to make us think of what people thought of lynching back then.

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  3. Phew...powerful, powerful stuff, Max. Your sensitive reading really deliverd a punch...

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  4. Really good job, Max!! I liked how you described everything in such detail, and I could really picture it in my head. You did a good job expressing your opinion and understanding of lynching and racism in general. I also liked the repetition of "I wonder why," it added a lot to it!

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