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Great Job Ben! I thought that your poem was great! I really liked the perspective that you took. Your words were well chosen and I think that you did a good job of explaining what the picture meant! Great Job!
That was excellent, Ben! You didn't waste a single word, and all of your words have a powerful meaning! This is great stuff! The picture makes a lot of sense with the poem! Great work!
This was extremely heart-wrenching. I was moved by the way that you told the back story to the victim, while describing how cruel their life was. I found it really powerful that you told clearly how difficult you're life was before, and how it is now. Great job!
Wow Ben that was really powerful! Each word adding to your poem to make it wonderful. It was serious and did not miss the measage it was conveying.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Ben! I thought that your poem was great! I really liked the perspective that you took. Your words were well chosen and I think that you did a good job of explaining what the picture meant! Great Job!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done...could stand alone as a brutally powerful history lesson...
ReplyDeleteThat was excellent, Ben! You didn't waste a single word, and all of your words have a powerful meaning! This is great stuff! The picture makes a lot of sense with the poem! Great work!
ReplyDeleteNice work Ben! I thought it was really powerful. I liked how you said that you had seen the devil when you saw the faces of your family.
ReplyDeleteThis was extremely heart-wrenching. I was moved by the way that you told the back story to the victim, while describing how cruel their life was. I found it really powerful that you told clearly how difficult you're life was before, and how it is now.
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
It was a great poem
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