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Nice job coach! I like how you also used the point of view as the tree, but the tree is taking the blame for the death as opposed to have the tree be angry at the people who made the tree be the killer (like I did). You did a fantastic job!
I really like this! The flow of the poem was really nice, and said a lot without using much words. I like that you started and ended with the same line, "poor black man." That made the poem sound extra good! Also, very good voiceover! It helped capture the emotion of the poem!
Wow Luke, your poem was amazing. I loved how you took on the role of the tree itself. Your voice over was very clear and well said. I think I see alot of good poetry writing in your future! Keep on writing. ~ariele
Nice job coach! I like how you also used the point of view as the tree, but the tree is taking the blame for the death as opposed to have the tree be angry at the people who made the tree be the killer (like I did). You did a fantastic job!
ReplyDeleteI really like this! The flow of the poem was really nice, and said a lot without using much words. I like that you started and ended with the same line, "poor black man." That made the poem sound extra good! Also, very good voiceover! It helped capture the emotion of the poem!
ReplyDeleteWow Luke, your poem was amazing. I loved how you took on the role of the tree itself. Your voice over was very clear and well said. I think I see alot of good poetry writing in your future! Keep on writing.
ReplyDelete~ariele