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Great Job YeonJae! I loved your sensory vocabulary and how you took on the role of the tree! Very Creative! I did find one spelling error but everything else was great!!
Great poem Yeonjae! I really liked how it was from the trees perspective and that the tree didn't know why he was killed. The words were very powerful. Good job!
I think you're poem was amazing! I think it's really awesome that you made the tree the "main character" as opposed to the victim. I didn't think that as the tree you were going to be questioning the victim, so I think it's fascinating that you found a way to perfectly question the victim while also being compassionate. Wonderful job!
Yeonjae your poem sounds good and I like the sensory vocabulary. I also like how you incorporated questions into your writing.
ReplyDeleteI love your poem! The last two lines were my favorite, Great job!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job YeonJae! I loved your sensory vocabulary and how you took on the role of the tree! Very Creative! I did find one spelling error but everything else was great!!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Yeonjae! I really liked how it was from the trees perspective and that the tree didn't know why he was killed. The words were very powerful. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI think you're poem was amazing! I think it's really awesome that you made the tree the "main character" as opposed to the victim. I didn't think that as the tree you were going to be questioning the victim, so I think it's fascinating that you found a way to perfectly question the victim while also being compassionate.
ReplyDeleteWonderful job!